moon glow
the track of your fingers
on my night skin
have we forgotten
the white stones
the track of your fingers
on my night skin
have we forgotten
the white stones
published in Haiku book Desert Rain
or the haiku version
moon glow
the track of your fingers
on my night skin
isabella.kramer©veredit2016
as you are count my freckles
one shoulder to the other
©magyar
as you are count my freckles
one shoulder to the other
©magyar
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How romantic! I composed a ５，７，５ syllabled Haiku inspired by yours.
AntwortenLöschen月照らし君の指先真珠映え’
Thank you so much. Must read yours soon!!
LöschenMy first version was an 5- 7 -5
Löschenmoon glow
the track of your fingers
on my night skin
__ Nice Isabella, as always!
AntwortenLöschenas you are count my freckles
one shoulder to the other
__ Just my two additional but plausible renga lines. _m
Thank you so much!!
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