moon glow





moon glow
the track of your fingers
on my night skin
have we forgotten
the white stones




or the haiku version


moon glow
the track of your fingers
on my night skin



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as you are count my freckles
one shoulder to the other



©magyar






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Kommentare:

  1. How romantic! I composed a 5,7,5 syllabled Haiku inspired by yours.
    月照らし君の指先真珠映え’

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    1. Thank you so much. Must read yours soon!!

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    2. My first version was an 5- 7 -5


      moon glow
      the track of your fingers
      on my night skin

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  2. __ Nice Isabella, as always!

    as you are count my freckles
    one shoulder to the other

    __ Just my two additional but plausible renga lines. _m

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